Intermediate ✍️ Writing · #21 of 98

Formal Email Structure

Subject, greeting, purpose, details, closing.

Examples

  • Dear Mr Lee, I am writing to enquire about...

Key rules

  • A formal email has a clear subject line, a formal greeting, a purpose statement, the key details and a polite closing
  • Use Dear Mr Lee or Dear Ms Patel
  • Close with Yours sincerely (named) or Yours faithfully (unnamed)

Common mistakes

  • Hey Mr Lee, → Dear Mr Lee,
  • Thanks, bye! → Yours sincerely, (followed by your full name)

Use cases

  • Writing to a manager or teacher
  • Contacting a company for information
  • Replying to an official enquiry
💡 Tip: Put the main request in the first two sentences so the reader does not need to search for it.

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